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Aug 5, 2020

Commentary on BBC-tv "The Mill"

             Commentary on The Mill, August 2020

The Mill – new BBC-tv drama written by John Fey. This mill narrative, set in England, 1830s, shows the horrors of the First Industrial Revolution as it grew to a monster and why the Luddites rose to action.

I compare this work with facts I gleaned from new research and new book, David Dale, A Life by David J. McLaren. Interested in conditions of mill workers 50 years earlier, 1786-99 in Scotland, at the New Lanark Mills? I refer you to my four “Dear Jean” letters elsewhere in this blog, fiction based on McLaren’s work. I write to my sister, Jean, and give her an account of me and my three kids, we work at the New Lanark Mills.

What follows here with this commentary of The Mill builds on my ”Dear Jean” letters. With the BBC work, we see the ongoing harsh conditions of textile mill life.  Yep, textiles. That’s what gets the cred for the birth of the Industrial Revolution.

Why? It was those mills, starting in the 1760s throughout England and Scotland, grouped under “Great Britain,” that changed the world. It was the first time in human history that so many strangers worked inside big buildings. Mill owners had no idea of how to deal with hundreds of people, so treat them like a herd of working mules. Work them 13 hours a day, seven days a week, what’s the problem? They can’t live 10 miles away, have to house them on site, might as well keep them busy… and oh, all those young ones in the workhouses, those of ‘stout body’ they can lift a load, we can use them. And use them, they did.

Prior to this massive change, to change sheep’s wool to a spool of yarn, to take a flax plant and turn it to a spool of yarn – google ‘make linen’ it was WORK – or turn balls of cotton into a strand of yarn a mile long, have that spool of yarn get some color (What? No red sheep? No blue flax? No green cotton? Duhh. In McLaren’s book, we learn how a spool of yarn can be turned red - YIKES), to make a yard of cloth - yep, that weft/warp loom thing that makes the very clothes you’re wearing right now, was all done by a few people. Most usually it was 10-20 men who knew each other and/or related, working in a shed, fulfilling an order by a guy walking or riding a horse from far away, the middle man put in his order with the workers, they did their part of the process, and the middle man would return, get the product then sell that bolt of material to the dress makers. Clothing was very expensive, most folks had one set of clothes, often “hand-me-down” clothes, some more prosperous would have two sets, one set for every day work, one set for Sunday. Then something happened.

Some clockmakers, and others who had engineering genius, looked at spinners and looms, and found better ways to get the job done. The birth of the Industrial Revolution. Things happened so fast, the changes affected all of Western culture so massively that it wasn’t called the Industrial Evolution.

A worthy thread through The Mill is the truth of the work conditions, the anger of the workers as we see the Luddites making their moves, the rise of unions, all fascinating. We meet and get to know a fellow who has engineering genius. What isn’t brought out is the true success/tragedy of one early English mill engineer who was from nobody, nothing, but could see better ways to make machines work. He rose to be the wealthiest man in the world, Richard Arkwright. He was completely unconcerned with welfare of mill workers, and became a hated focus of English mill workers, but the King liked him, became Sir Richard. Really. As you’ll see in my “Dear Jean” letters, Dale and Arkwright started the New Lanark Mill plan together, then, for some undiscovered reasons Dale delicately got out of the legal relationship and still kept Arkwright on the job as mill plans moved along. Dale became sole owner. Wish I could have been a fly on the wall for those discussions!

An aside, with the changes starting at this time, the shape of the human face changed very fast. Prior to 1700s, human skulls had well-aligned teeth, but starting then, the human skull changed and too many teeth in the smaller mouth, teeth grew crooked. Just an archelogy fact. Most of us have no wisdom teeth, last four in back of upper and lower jaw, taken by dentist to avoid serious crowding. Blame it on the Industrial Revolution. Better farming, less famine, steady income, more meat, bigger brain, longer life, etc.

With The Mill, as we see young people working, we follow a group of young women who work together on the mill floor and bunk together in a crappy room at the mill, they are older teen girls. Their lives are completely ruled by the mill staff. We learn through Series 1, four episodes, that these girls are from the workhouse. We get some glimpses of what that means, one scene is in such a place, yep, living nightmare. The mill workers have a much better existence by comparison. From really really shitty to shitty.

I took a deep dive into Scotland’s famous mill, New Lanark Mills, near Glasgow, with my blog posts “Dear Jean” – four letters 1786-1806, to my sister who went to the colonies and I’m here near Glasgow with my three kids and dead husband. I tell her about how me and kids got work in New Lanark Mills, hired by first owner David Dale.  A Scot historian, David J. McLaren, spent over 30 years digging into Dale’s life, and I’m grateful for his excellent new book, David Dale, A Life. His publisher, Stenlake Publishing Limited, did a remarkable honor with the book, tons of color photos, maps, original source documents, it’s a worthy book. I bought my copy from the publisher, didn’t want amazon to get my money. Odd that I worked for some of the Dale progeny in New Harmony, Indiana, there’s that “degrees of separation” thing.

What is definitely a fact, the early mills had mostly children workers. Read on.

What we need to consider first is this: in Western Culture, in the 1700s, childhood was mostly over when that person was 5, maybe 6 years old. Really. Definitely for the poor, which of course was most of humanity, and among the wealthy, their 6 yr. old kid was always dressed like a little adult and expected to conduct themselves as adults. Really. We enlightened 21st century eyes see the evil of the mill owners to “employ” 5 yr. old kids, any better that Dale started his “boarders” at 6 yrs. old, harsh, eh? But keep in mind, this was the cultural norm, kids anywhere that age were expected to work all day, every day. And I don’t mean your 6 yr. old kid would help neighbor farmer for the day and come home that night. No. The parent would sign legal document and kid would go live with farmer, or merchant and live in back room of shop, or upper-class household for domestic work, for years.  Rich kids, especially boys, didn’t have to do common work, but were taught with intense determination to be proper cultured intensely striving adults. Most definitely no such thing as a ‘teenager.’ If that rich lad wasn’t a sea captain by the time he was 20, he was probably a loser. The Industrial Revolution didn’t start child labor, it just refined it.

As I consider The Mill workers of 1830s, and think about what I’ve learned from McLaren’s book, here’s one very big difference. In the 1780-90s, at New Lanark Mills, when a “boarder” turned 16, he or she was given a new set of clothes, a new pair of shoes, and a “good-bye, good-luck.” 16 was legal adulthood. We see in The Mill that the young women will get their freedom at 21. Hmm, big diff. I refer you to my “Dear Jean” letters for who the “boarders” were. Oh here’s another big diff: “boarders” in New Lanark Mills 1786-1799 slept three to a straw mat bed, 75 to a room. The young women we see in The Mill better count their blessings!

Another aspect implied with The Mill, workers really struggle with reading, and we learn that London passes a new bill, 1832, and mill owners have to educate their workers. Well! How about a cred to David Dale, he took that on with all his working children, 1786-1799, they had schooling every night after working 13 hours! Ok, they got a 1/2hr. break for crappy breakfast, and one hour for skimpy dinner, you do the math. But they could read, do numbers, and write, what we consider a 3rd grade education. When they were free to go at 16, they had a resume! Add this: no such thing as free public schooling. Hell to the no. Dale’s parents paid local parish school for his minimal education. Reading and numbers were an important rare skill, and to write was even more exceptional. Really. Arkwright could barely scribble his name.

Another important thread through The Mill is activists concerned about the slavery issue. FYI, in Dale’s time, 50 yrs. earlier, the huge issue was Slave Trade Abolition. In the 1780s, some passionate, angry Quakers and others were traveling through Great Britain and rousing people to understand the evils of the Slave Trade – NOTE: this is very different than the abolition of slavery. Check the “Dear Jean” letters. I wonder if The Mill narrative tweaked history, we see a banner “Am I not a woman and a sister” with graphic of kneeling slave, the masculine of this very graphic was a part of Dale’s turn to understanding how these humans were being sold by other humans like horses. Or, as John Prine sang, “Some Humans Ain’t Human.”

An aspect of The Mill that I find valuable but likely not appreciated in current culture, the serious meaning of a handshake. Even in mid-20th century it held sacred meaning. How well I remember my New Harmony employer, one of the wealthiest women in the world thanks to her grandfather’s and father’s success with oil, she let me know once with her imperious tone that her father and his gentlemen partners did their agreements with a handshake. Some lawyers saw a way to diminish that gesture as any legal anything, and her father’s business life caved on this very point. I wrote a book about my life and work with this woman, she married into the Dale legacy and brought great wealth to the marriage and New Harmony, manuscript seeks literary agent.

Something of The Mill that I ponder – in Dale’s mill, very few men worked the mill operation. Yet in The Mill, we see men everywhere on the mill floor, working along with the women. In McLaren’s book, he has documents of New Lanark Mills numbers of workers year by year, most children, more boys than girls, then women, least few employees – men. Curious.

With The Mill, we get a fast glimpse of the Liverpool Workhouse. Maybe BBC assumes all Brits know the backstory? Sure isn’t given much explanation in this new tv series. What I’ve learned from McLaren’s research, in Glasgow and Edinburgh, in 1780s, probably much earlier too, was that there were no homeless on those streets. No! That would mean that City Fathers weren’t good Christians. Their solution to the problem of people forced to leave a kid on the curb, or that elder with no family or place to live, or the odd one mixed up in the head, was to take control, bring them to an institution, commonly referred to as workhouses, in Glasgow it was Town’s Hospital, not really a hospital, but a live-in, lock-in horrible residence for all the above mentioned tragic humans. Keep in mind that with the ravages of disease, people were dying like flies. You could be fine in the morning, and dead at night, and family life changed instantly. When the mills got moving, it was the ideal setting for young hands work, and what a help to the City budget to get that child out of state care. The state was still legally in charge of that child, but signed over to a mill. No pay, but a much better living circumstance, considering.

I ponder another difference about the kids going from workhouse to mill, in Dale’s years, he paid Town’s Hospital for each child, p. 86 David Dale A Life, if you want to check it out. In The Mill, we see the workhouse paying the mill guy for taking a kid. Hmm. You’ll see this thread play out as the mill guy is supposed to return a kid, which would mean return the $, he doesn’t, oh yeah, the weird weird scene with the little girl offering him more than a kiss, weird, BBC doing a Hollywood thing there, but he keeps that money, more reason to hate the mill cruelty. Spoiler – he gets busted.

I like how we watch one mill worker, intent on finding her past, and what truth we learn. That was very well portrayed, harsh reality. That thread gives a nod to a common death, woman dying while giving birth. Much of this in McLaren’s research. Dale’s wife, a wealthy woman, died of “childbed.” Too bad the doctors were still in the Stone Age while the lawyers AKA “Writers to the Signet” were all dialed in.

Gratitude to the writers, thinkers, crew, actors and timing for this remarkable piece of history.

 


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